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FIREFLY REFERENCE!!! Cause the Browncoats lose The Battle of Serenity Valley. While I am REALLY not qualified at all to do this here is some critiquing that I did. The song goes too slow, I realize this is supposed to be somber, but it needs variation, the background strings give it a somber feel, but the main beat is not dynamic enough and it makes the song boring. The chorus is a nice touch but is drowned out by that piano and the strings in the background. It needs to be more active and maybe faster, or more rich in melody. You did a great job of pinning down the 'losing battle feel,' but right now all I can picture for a battle scene is people getting shot and stuff blowing up in slow motion.