Your interpretation of the letter was spot on. You gave a great performance and stuck with the theme you put into the voice acting. I also enjoyed the background music which gave it that little extra hilarity. Your best line delivery was the "You tramp!" outburst.
Now if only the commercials for Orangina weren't so fucking weird.
This takes me way back, at the end you should've put in a guy screaming "FUCK!" as the fat Kirby worth 2 lives fell right before it could be turned in. I love how you kept to the original melody of the song, and gave it a relaxed tempo
Loss of the hopelessness feel
Around 1:30 you lose the sound that you had in the begging and it takes away from the song as a whole. It jumps from being a creepy, dead hopeless feel; to a bright spacey kinda techno feel. You should have continued the sound effect or not used such a bright sounding techno beat. And then it jumps back at the end to the hopelessness feel. It would have been much better had you stuck with one theme. The song is still really fucking cool
Got th ereference right here
FIREFLY REFERENCE!!! Cause the Browncoats lose The Battle of Serenity Valley. While I am REALLY not qualified at all to do this here is some critiquing that I did. The song goes too slow, I realize this is supposed to be somber, but it needs variation, the background strings give it a somber feel, but the main beat is not dynamic enough and it makes the song boring. The chorus is a nice touch but is drowned out by that piano and the strings in the background. It needs to be more active and maybe faster, or more rich in melody. You did a great job of pinning down the 'losing battle feel,' but right now all I can picture for a battle scene is people getting shot and stuff blowing up in slow motion.
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